Improving my Production

I have recieved teacher feedback for the first draft of my Production.
Below is a list of improvements for my Magazine front Cover:

• addition of a slogan near my magazine's name
• addition of a 'puff', in the top right hand corner
• big, bright colours needed
• decrease size of the barcode and move it to the bottom of the cover
• date of release & issue no. need to be smaller and immediately below the magazine's name
• adjust the background colour 
• create a straplin at the bottom of the cover
• explain who minor models on the cover are
• 'splash' the main article in a banner across the middle of the cover

I have also been given improvements to make on my article:

• replace words such as: urged, unfolds, all-revealing (doesn't make sense) and viewers with alternative, more conventional words e.g. uncovers
• revise some quotes, so that they make more grammatical sense
• resolve small typing errors
• addition of background information e.g. the drugs, rehab and miscarriage
• addition of information on the effect of her return on Ramsay Street
• overall, lengthen the article

I agree with all the above imrovements and believe that I can resolve all of them in time for my deadline for the second draft.