Continued Improvements on my Production

So far, in order to reach my next deadline, I have corrected the grammatical and spelling errors in my article on'Pauline Fisher'. I am also revising the narrative, so that I have more/less detail where appropriate, accordingly. I have also started to re-draft my magazine cover, adding a banner and tagline. I also hope to add a 'puff' in the top corner and more storylines.