Pitch Presentation

I gave a presentation to pitch my production piece ideas, to my A Level Media Studies class and teacher and I was given reflection feedback on the quality of my ideas.
The constructive criticism was:

• to improve the clarity of my target audience (broaden age width)
• reconsider the colour scheme of my production (on the basis of my pre production)
• confirm what the double page feature article will be about/consist of
• confirm who my models will be
• confirm what the headlines featuring on the front cover will be

I feel that since pitching my magazine, I have improved my understanding of what my article will be like/about, shown by the planning in my previous post.
I still need to consider my target audience, colour scheming and exact wording of headlines.
However, I fell that I will delay headlining and colour scheming until I have established my article, and start to plan my front cover.
The commended features were:

• appropriate and original title of magazine
• good quality and realistic pre productions
• constructive use of results from questionnaire
• an achievement of effective skill in using photohsop
• organised element to my planning

I am pleased that people recognised the professionalism of my pre productions, as I put effort into making them look realistic. Also, I am glad that I used my questionnaire results constructively, in the eyes of my peers.